4. Refusing Typical Requests
As you
move through your professional career, you will receive requests for favors and
contributions. You will not be able to honor all the requests you receive and
will sometimes refuse requests. When refusing a request, first think about the
receiver, and then determine the approach for your message.
When
refusing typical requests,focus
on explanations and praise .
Points:
1 / 1
Close Explanation
Explanation:
When
composing a refusal message, focus on clear explanations and praise rather than
refusals and apologies. Do not avoid praise or explanations since explanations
will help your reader understand your reasoning and praise may build goodwill.
Do not apologize or emphasize the refusal.
Consider
the following scenario and refusal message, and then answer the questions.
Teresa is
the owner of a small chain of coffee shops, WhichBrew Coffee Company. She was
recently invited to a local business luncheon hosted by the mayor of the city
but will not be able to attend the event.
WhichBrew Coffee Company
4356 Bean Plaza
Blend, OR 98675
(333) 349-3432
May 13, 2013
Mayor Sam Cho
City Hall
3495 Galvin Boulevard
Blend, OR 98675
Dear Mayor Cho:
Your hard
work during your last three years in office has made a difference. The downtown
beautification project is a colorful success. The addition of potted plants,
flower beds, and window boxes makes our city a lovely place to be. Thank you
for playing a key role in creating a pleasant destination for downtown shoppers
and visitors.
Receiving
an invitation to your downtown business luncheon next month was a privilege.
Although I must decline your invitation, it is for a reason I am sure you can
appreciate. WhichBrew is preparing to open a small chain of bakeries called
WhatDough. The grand opening of our first WhatDough bakery is on the same day
as your business luncheon. Since I would love to have the opportunity to visit
with you, may I invite you to cut the ribbon at the grand opening of our second
WhatDough location? I am aiming for the second week of August, but I will call
to confirm the date and time.
WhichBrew
and WhatDough are successful ventures because of your efforts to revitalize
downtown. The customers who come into our stores are friendly and value this
community. Please let me know if I can be of any assistance to you or to the
city in the future. I will contact you next week regarding the date and time of
our grand opening ceremony.
Sincerely,
Teresa Vaughn
Which
refusal technique is successfully used in the closing of this message?
Ending
positively with compliments and an offer of assistance
Ending
with an apology
Ending
with a statement discouraging future correspondence
Points:
1 / 1
Close Explanation
Explanation:
Maintain
a positive tone in your closing by giving sincere compliments and by offering
assistance. Do not end an invitation refusal by discouraging future
correspondence or apologizing. When sending a refusal to an invitation, it is
important to maintain goodwill to aid future relationships.
What does
the writer of this message do to maintain goodwill?
Implies
the refusal rather than stating it outright
Provides
an alternative time to visit
Promotes
the remarkable coffee at WhichBrew
Points:
1 / 1
Close Explanation
Explanation:
This
message works to preserve the relationship between the mayor and writer and to
maintain goodwill by offering an alternative time to visit: the grand opening
of the second WhatDough location. The message clearly declines the invitation
and does not promote WhichBrew coffee.
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